You know, I have read a vast amount of the stories posted on this site and have found them both erotic and exciting. I have masturbated over and over again reading other peoples sexual adventures placing my mind and thoughts at the scene where your story takes place. I want to thank ALL of you who have put your stories on this site for everyone else to enjoy. BUT, there is one thing that strongly disappioints many of the readers on this site reading your stories: LEARN HOW TO WRITE. Your story is good, but it can be made so much better if those writing the story knew proper English and punctuation.

A sexual encounter is better lived, yet us readers live it through YOUR story told.

A story told is only as good as the WAY it is told. Without the proper grammar the story could be lost in its impact and meaning. You write the story to share with us the passion and lust of your encounters, but all that is lost if you do not write with the proper structure. You write the story as if to say, "Don't you wish you lived this experience?" Well, we do, everytime we read your story. But again, a story told is only as good as the way it is told. Without the proper grammar, the whole "live my experience" is lost and voided. For us to truly live your passion and lust, at least "cross your T's and dot you I's" properly. That will make your story much more fulfilling and a hell of alot more erotic and exciting.